NOTES: Workshop Critiques

Going to keep moving along with the shots.
After showing my work at the workshop, it was pointed out that i have to be careful with showing weight from the basket especially on shot 3. Basket arm should move less and take longer to get to where it needs to be . Another note is that i should tone down the reaction on shot 3, since Carl will be exploding with anger later on in the film. This way i conserve that energy for later in order to have a better build up throughout the film.

No Betty in Self Checkout?

Sadly there will be no Betty. I decided to cut her out, it just wasn't working out. But no worries!! she will have a cameo. I plan to make her a missing person on the milk carton.

Progress..

Well, Self Checkout is getting animated....Finally!
There has been mention that shot 2 and 3 have broken the 180 rule. Will have to rearrange the camera in order to get it right.
I also have to add a "moving hold" at the beginning of shot 3.

memory lane

Oh Betty....

Isn't she lovely ,
Isn't she wonderfull ,
Isn't she precious....

Environment in 3D!!!

OMG its in 3D!!! wow..its a W.I.P. but getting there...
The model for my monitor may change..as the story is going to be more physical between Happy the store mascot and Carl...Also my newest character "Betty" is now replacing the police officer. She will play a grumpy happy foods employee that doesn't seem to notice the problem that Carl is having with the machine...

The problem with the story is.......

Reworking Animatic....will post revised animatic soon.